Programme 01:
Script & Structure Audit

A forensic story pass that fixes retention problems at the source.

01 — What This Solves

  1. Openings that don’t win the first 30–60 seconds

  2. Too much context too early (answers before questions)

  3. Flat mid-film tension with no escalation ladder

  4. Reveals without setup; payoffs that feel unearned

  5. Drafts that explain instead of unfolding like an investigation

02 — What You Receive

  1. A retention-diagnostic notes doc (hook, escalation, reveal timing, act breaks)

  2. A rebuilt beat spine (what moves where, and why)

  3. A priority fix list (highest-leverage changes first)

  4. Optional: rewritten opening (first 60–120 seconds) to prove the approach

Pricing

£600 – £1,000
(depends on runtime and whether an opening rewrite is included)

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03 — Who It’s For?

  1. YouTube documentary channels and producers

  2. Writers who need a senior structure pass before draft 2

  3. Editors inheriting scripts that won’t hold

  4. Teams scaling output who need repeatable story discipline

04 — Outcome

A documentary that holds attention because the structure is doing the work: clearer questions, tighter reveals, stronger escalation, earned payoffs.