Programme 03:
Documentary Edit Pass

A story-producer edit pass to rebuild momentum, tension, and payoff.

01 — What This Solves

  1. Cuts that feel assembled rather than authored

  2. Mid-film drop-offs (no escalation, no re-hooks)

  3. Over-explanation, repetition, slow evidence progression

  4. Payoffs that don’t land because setup is missing

  5. Timeline clarity issues and unclear stakes

02 — What You Receive

  1. Timestamped restructure notes (move / cut / rebuild)

  2. Re-hook plan (open + mid-film resets + act turns)

  3. Payoff tuning (setup → delay → delivery)

  4. Optional Loom walkthrough explaining the logic

Pricing

£1,500 - TBC
(depends on runtime, access, and Loom involvement)

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03 — Who It’s For?

  1. Editors working with long-form documentary footage

  2. Producers who need a senior story brain on the cut

  3. Channels with strong material but inconsistent hold

  4. Teams wanting repeatable edit discipline

04 — Outcome

A documentary that plays with forward momentum: cleaner structure, sharper reveals, tension that escalates rather than dissolves.